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Re: Updated! Project #3 - Preliminary Roughs, Donna Harn

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 4:38 pm
by Alexey M
After you updated your second design, it turned out just awesome! Great colors and composition!

Re: Updated! Project #3 - Preliminary Roughs, Donna Harn

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 4:40 pm
by nunezm
Hi Donna,
Both of your rough came out great. I like them both. My personal favorite is the second I really like the images being used and the I really like the redo design!! The color choice is great. :)

Re: Updated! Project #3 - Preliminary Roughs, Donna Harn

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 5:10 pm
by campbell_mckeogh
great layout work for the second one like the header image

Re: Updated! Project #3 - Preliminary Roughs, Donna Harn

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 5:13 pm
by OliviasMama12
Hi Donna-

I really like your second design more because I think it is very clear to understand and nicely presented, and your redesign EVEN more after you've slightly tweaked to color scheme! You are on a great path- keep it up!!!

Re: Updated! Project #3 - Preliminary Roughs, Donna Harn

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 6:26 pm
by Siri
Donna,

Though the home page of your first rough really caught my attention, the layout of the second one works better and after seeing your redesign I'm looking forward to how much further you take it. It still seems a bit too tight, or closed in, but so far so good. Perhaps consider using a sans-serif font for your headers as well?

Re: Updated! Project #3 - Preliminary Roughs, Donna Harn

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 6:26 pm
by freem110
I like the second layout and love the revised colors for it. It looks great!

Re: Updated! Project #3 - Preliminary Roughs, Donna Harn

Posted: Tue May 07, 2013 8:40 am
by Heyyou
Donna,

I like your updated roughs the best. The color scheme works really well and it give you some room to move around content. Very nice start.

Aharon

Re: Updated! Project #3 - Preliminary Roughs, Donna Harn

Posted: Wed May 15, 2013 10:56 pm
by Landsknecht
Great job. I must apologize for giving unhelpful late feedback.

I really like both layout ideas. The second layout (non-computer) has more visual interest in these roughs.