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Re: Project one final

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 11:01 pm
by elizabeth_mejia
I am really liking the blue and yellow together those colors look great. My suggestion would be to maybe move the resources button up with the projects button so its not by itself at the bottom. And maybe remove the Egyptian symbol next to the TMCC logo and move it in it's place.

Re: Project one final

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 10:44 am
by MattShock23
It does look cool, I like how you added in something of your own interest to add a bit of flavor to the layout. The only thing I'd suggest is your placement of the characters next to your upper right buttons, they kinda look like they are just floating there in space. Also, the resources button gets lost in the background pic...

Re: Project one final

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 3:53 pm
by graceinreno
Really cool concept here! I really love the imagery and Egyptian theme. I actually really like your 'communication through symbols' intro that you wrote with this post and think that it might have a place in your paragraph on the page. I'd kinda prefer not to see hyphenation in the body text, but maybe that's just a Dan-ism that I'm still holding onto. I agree that the resources link gets a bit lost, but it could simply be moved down a bit and you'd be good to go.

Re: Project one final

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 4:12 pm
by danistephens3
I really like the contrast between the yellow and blue in this, its very pleasing to the eye. The symbols that you chose to use tie well with the background image and gives you an almost ancient feel in a modern setting. Great job!

Re: Project one final

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 4:41 pm
by eric_sallender
Looking good Adam! :) You've picked out nice colors that work well with each other and still fit within the egyptian theme you have going on. I can't really pick out anything that stands out. Maybe you could reposition your resources link to a part of your page that is lighter, but other than that it looks pretty good :)

Re: Project one final

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 7:15 pm
by tabasco_lynn
This looks really cool, but why are the pyramids blue?