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Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 9:30 pm
by Instructor
I love this album cover look. Very nice!

This design has such a great emotional feeling to it. Distant, warm, and a little sad. Like a gentle breeze blowing in through soft curtains. It has excellent use of color, type, layout, and contrast. I like the placement of the ancillary description text at the top right and bottom left.

I'm not 100% sold on the typewriter font, but it seems to work okay here.

Such a great design! Great work!

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 11:05 pm
by elizabeth_mejia
I love this design very nice and clean and professional. I love the colors you used too so nice and warm feeling. The only thing I can suggest is maybe to move the "GRC 175 and Web Design and publishing I" above the line where it says your name and change the font color so it will stand out in that spot. I don't know I just see it being there.

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 10:39 am
by MattShock23
I really like the design and color choices you used, it is very unique. My only suggestion is try moving your links buttons into the purple margin you have offset to the right? And possibly capitalize your name. Otherwise, it looks great.

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 4:05 pm
by danistephens3
I love the simplicity of this! Its bright and eye appealing, almost like waking up early to see the sunrise. Great job!

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 4:53 pm
by eric_sallender
The type is hard to read with your small file, but once you click on it and make it full size, I am going to have to disagree with everyone and say that you have nice contrast within the entire design. I have no issues reading your information once it is at full size. I love the design! Great job Grace!

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 5:58 pm
by eARTh2haleypw
Hello Grace! As much as I loved those little birdie navigation buttons, I'm please to see you chose to further explore this design. Very simple and clean. I like the transparency of the pink rectangular shape, it adds depth without detracting from the photo image. Nice touch. I hate to say this but your body copy??? It's a requirement but I like the simplicity.

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 6:00 pm
by grc_175_rpereyra
nice design, love the image and fonts. great job..

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 7:23 pm
by tabasco_lynn
I really like everything about this design... Maybe capitalize the first letters of your first and last name though.

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2014 7:58 pm
by oasib
great job! like the colors, and the backround. It looks like a picture of light when the camera moved, or not? i was looking and looking but still could not figure it out...lol..Not sure how you did the backround, but I very like it, works nice with your overall concept. Simple, but et interesting!