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Re: Project One Final-Jonathon J.

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 10:42 pm
by elizabeth_mejia
Wow really nice design. I love the photo you used it makes it look so clean and professional especially how you organized the content. The black, gray, and white gives it a nice feel. My only suggestion would be to maybe change the paragraph color from black to white so it stands out more against the dark grey bridge behind it.

Re: Project One Final-Jonathon J.

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 10:47 am
by MattShock23
Looks really good Jonathon, your pic is hilarious and the design seems on par. Maybe reduce the scale of the logo just a bit like everyone else said and I think you've nailed it.

Re: Project One Final-Jonathon J.

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 3:59 pm
by graceinreno
This has a really great feel to it, and I love your original background image. And to be sure, your personal logo is totally bitchin. Personally, I would prefer to see a bit of color, even one little splash! I also think you could work with the paragraph alignment of your main body text and do a spellcheck. ;) Regardless, it's a good looking site and that picture of you is utterly adorable.

Re: Project One Final-Jonathon J.

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 4:09 pm
by danistephens3
I like the background image that you chose. It goes well with the other elements of the design. I think adding a splash of color here and there would really make it pop. Great job!

Re: Project One Final-Jonathon J.

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 4:47 pm
by eric_sallender
This site has a nice, professional quality about it that works! :) The only issue I have is your body copy is getting a little lost because of the backfround image, but it's nothing too big. Great job.

Re: Project One Final-Jonathon J.

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 4:59 pm
by eARTh2haleypw
Hey there! Can I just say awesome, awesome logo! I really admire the fact that you decided to incorporate your own photography. It's a beautiful image and I think it works well. I also enjoy your adherence to grayscale - very sophisticated. I do agree that the balancing of the content on the tip of the pier creates tension and not in a good way. otherwise, nice work!

Re: Project One Final-Jonathon J.

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 6:13 pm
by kamilyon
I like your final project

Re: Project One Final-Jonathon J.

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 7:35 pm
by tabasco_lynn
I really like your background photograph and your profile image! The boxes are cool too.

Re: Project One Final-Jonathon J.

Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2014 7:39 pm
by oasib
Haha...fun portrait pic. Like the picture you took that is in the backround. Nice Job!