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Re: Mark Nichols P2 Prelim. Critique

Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 4:21 pm
by aznpandaaa
I'm not sure how to compare the two only because it looks too similar but I might be liking the first one better. I tend to like navbars on the side myself. I do like the light opac of the boxes it adds to the design. =)

Re: Mark Nichols P2 Prelim. Critique

Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 4:28 pm
by JonathonJames
I kinda like the top design a little better, although the bottom's navigation looks more modern. so maybe blending the two designs?
good job.

Re: Mark Nichols P2 Prelim. Critique

Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 4:30 pm
by kamilyon
I like the first one but i think the orange in your photo is too saturated.

Re: Mark Nichols P2 Prelim. Critique

Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 7:16 pm
by graceinreno
I like the button/navigation bar color scheme of the second one better, but the layout of the first slightly more. I also like that the 'kicking gal' isn't obscured in the first one. Also, the type you chose for the buttons has kind of a friendly, bright feel to me, whereas i kinda want to see a more 'I'm a badass' typeface. But overall, I think it's super strong with very clear navigation and continuity!

Re: Mark Nichols P2 Prelim. Critique

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2014 2:23 am
by oasib
both of the ideas are very simular, at the begging I thought they are part of one layout. In secon done there is better geometry and balance, but in the first one I like the orange color of you home buttons. I like the banner, looks great, good start!