Re: Preliminary for Project 2 - Elizabeth Mejia
Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 9:44 am
Hey there Elizabeth! This is just hilarious and over the top! It's great
I'm liking the 2nd rough a tad more just because I'm finding the imagery more appealing I suppose. Nice use of transparencies - gives the page an interesting texture. Also, your font choice is great in that it seems to elicit a serious and reliable tone with the sans serif "Burlington News" and then you play with a fun character font as the nav buttons.
One thing I suggest changing is maybe you can employ the layout of the inner page of the 1st rough to the inner page of the 2nd? I just feel it's better organized and possesses a sense of hierarchy that the 2nd lacks. Otherwise, great job!
I'm liking the 2nd rough a tad more just because I'm finding the imagery more appealing I suppose. Nice use of transparencies - gives the page an interesting texture. Also, your font choice is great in that it seems to elicit a serious and reliable tone with the sans serif "Burlington News" and then you play with a fun character font as the nav buttons.
One thing I suggest changing is maybe you can employ the layout of the inner page of the 1st rough to the inner page of the 2nd? I just feel it's better organized and possesses a sense of hierarchy that the 2nd lacks. Otherwise, great job!