Project 2 Prelim Grace Hutchison

[Deitrik]

I would go with your second design on this one, I feel it would be easy to navigate to, and would work more towards the websites needs. It's also has a nice color scheme that works very nice with the websites logo.

[d3ft0n3s23]

I like the second idea. Great color choices that are similar to the logo. It seems more fitting for a book store. The first one seems to have a lot of empty space. But you're first one could work if you experimented more with the elements you're trying to use. Instead of using the entire bulding entrance for the design, maybe just use one column for a small backdrop to a side navigation bar. I know you do photography, so go and take a bunch of pictures of the establishment that define the character of the store and try and use the images here and there on your pages or maybe a background. Just food for thought. Good Job!

[kirin]

I like your color choices, the only thing that I recommend is pushing the pillars behind the bushes. That way we get a better sense of depth.

[aznpandaaa]

Def the first one looks better but the second one could have some potential as well. If you want to do the second maybe play around with complementary colors for the bg instead of white. =)

[kamilyon]

I like your concept but it would be nice to see something in the background. I want to go see this place lol

[JonathonJames]

I think that the first design looks a little more like a book store with the columns in front. So the imagery ties in more with the content of the website. I would like to see how the inner pages would look though.

[mccuske2]

i like the first one but i think it can be change up a bit. bring the trees up and put some word under that

[diggitydave]

Hi, Grace, so im as little late on this but I like aspects of both. I like the visual beginnings of the first one but also like the layout of the second as far as navigation and information. Im seeing a combination of both. Information and nav combined with a more refined visual of the first.

[oasib]

i like the idea were you used the part of the historical bulding that it is in, I think it a great start for creating something fun and original. great layouts!