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Re: PRELIM FOR PROJECT 2

Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2014 9:48 pm
by MattShock23
The second design looks really elegant and smooth, but I have to go with the red/white colors and the image of the Bboy on the first design. Try using a more graffiti like typeface for your navigation sub heads? Good start though.

Re: PRELIM FOR PROJECT 2

Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2014 10:10 pm
by elizabeth_mejia
Both of these designs are really great, I'm leaning more towards the first one because the red and the image makes it so dynamic. My suggestion would be to maybe put a text box behind the word paragraphs because they seem to just float there.

Re: PRELIM FOR PROJECT 2

Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 10:17 am
by d3ft0n3s23
I feel the first one with the red and white design are great. The second one has too much of an implication of one target audience which doesn't seems to conflict with word "unlimited". The design could allow you to use people in different dance poses or moves in each of the different pages, but only a suggestion. Great work!

Re: PRELIM FOR PROJECT 2

Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 3:43 pm
by kirin
I like design 1, the image is really cool. The only thing I might change is the background color. You don't need a graphic in the background because of the dancer, but something other than white in the background will allow our eyes to adjust a lot easier and will pop off the dancer image a lot more.

Re: PRELIM FOR PROJECT 2

Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 4:31 pm
by aznpandaaa
the first one fosho is more dynamic and pleasing to look it. It reli states more of what the page is going for. I like the second one too but the design doesn't reli scream "Dance." Great Job!

Re: PRELIM FOR PROJECT 2

Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 4:34 pm
by JonathonJames
I really like how the bottom design looks fairly modern and elegant. It's hard to say which i like better cause I can see where someone would go to the site for hip-hop dancing, but see a ballerina and be turned off? possibly blending the two designs, The headline of the ballerina design can work with the hip hop design, so that might work.

Re: PRELIM FOR PROJECT 2

Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 5:05 pm
by kamilyon
i like both of them for two diffrent target audience

Re: PRELIM FOR PROJECT 2

Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2014 3:18 pm
by diggitydave
First one really is eye catching and for me gives a strong sense of style. Tells me a lot about what I am getting into.

Re: PRELIM FOR PROJECT 2

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2014 2:10 am
by oasib
i like both of you desinges, well done, good interfaces, the only thing that I migh consider is adding to the desig that you pick eather adding something feminine or something male. Because as of now, one layout invites only women (ballay shoes) and the other layout only man, since this studio for both man and women and has varioty of dance otprions, i would add an image that would be unisex and invite both man and women.images speak louder then words! hope this make sance, anyways great job on your layouts, well done!!