Allen Wilburn, Project 2.

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JonathonJames
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Re: Allen Wilburn, Project 2.

Post by JonathonJames »

Both websites have a really great start to them, I feel as though they are lacking a little. They both feel small and confined.

Project 1:
Your project one tab has type coming out of a box, which doesn't look good. Other than that, it looks good. The layout works for your design.

Project 2:
I was scrolling through your pages and it looks like there are only 4 pages, and your about page has a brown background as opposed to the rest having a white, so it looks out of place.
I do like most of the imagery, but if you were to draw the background to the whole web page it would look even better! (instead of being confined to a little box)
-Jonathon J.

tabasco_lynn
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Re: Allen Wilburn, Project 2.

Post by tabasco_lynn »

I enjoyed that you included EXPLODERS, it looks way better than the first site! Very well organized.
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kirin
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Re: Allen Wilburn, Project 2.

Post by kirin »

Good job, major improvement over the original. The only issue that i have is the amount of information that is on some of those pages (it kind of scares me).
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MattShock23
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Re: Allen Wilburn, Project 2.

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Allen, yours didn't show up....
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