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Re: Allen Wilburn, Project 2.

Posted: Thu May 01, 2014 7:58 am
by JonathonJames
Both websites have a really great start to them, I feel as though they are lacking a little. They both feel small and confined.

Project 1:
Your project one tab has type coming out of a box, which doesn't look good. Other than that, it looks good. The layout works for your design.

Project 2:
I was scrolling through your pages and it looks like there are only 4 pages, and your about page has a brown background as opposed to the rest having a white, so it looks out of place.
I do like most of the imagery, but if you were to draw the background to the whole web page it would look even better! (instead of being confined to a little box)

Re: Allen Wilburn, Project 2.

Posted: Thu May 01, 2014 5:23 pm
by tabasco_lynn
I enjoyed that you included EXPLODERS, it looks way better than the first site! Very well organized.

Re: Allen Wilburn, Project 2.

Posted: Thu May 08, 2014 2:56 pm
by kirin
Good job, major improvement over the original. The only issue that i have is the amount of information that is on some of those pages (it kind of scares me).

Re: Allen Wilburn, Project 2.

Posted: Thu May 15, 2014 4:27 pm
by MattShock23
Allen, yours didn't show up....