Re: Preliminary_Critique_Project_1
Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2014 11:35 am
Hey Alexa,
Of these two, I like the first layout best. While the second layout has good composition, I feel that compared to the first one it seems to standard and uniform. I like the circle ideas of the first one, and while it doesn't have any rigid borders or columns it is still fairly organized. I especially like the idea of the daisy petals appearing on each page, connecting every page to one another. My issue with it is that as the rough is presented, it almost seems to have too much floating going around, so should you go with this one then I look forward to seeing it in Photoshop!
Of these two, I like the first layout best. While the second layout has good composition, I feel that compared to the first one it seems to standard and uniform. I like the circle ideas of the first one, and while it doesn't have any rigid borders or columns it is still fairly organized. I especially like the idea of the daisy petals appearing on each page, connecting every page to one another. My issue with it is that as the rough is presented, it almost seems to have too much floating going around, so should you go with this one then I look forward to seeing it in Photoshop!