PrelimCrit - Proj 1
Re: PrelimCrit - Proj 1
Of the two layouts I'm definitely liking the first one, it's simple and to the point in a bold way, the silhouette makes for great contrast. The second layout brings the word 'lovely' to mind, and while it is a good layout it seems too empty as it currently stands. There's no major element taking up the space like it does in the first layout.
Cristina Sánchez
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Re: PrelimCrit - Proj 1
Seth,
These are some nice clean designs you've got started here.
I think the first design is a little bit too minimal unfortunately; it looks very similar to what the mobile version of a website might look like. There's not quite enough substance in it for a desktop site though.
Your second design works a little bit better; again, very minimalist, but not overpoweringly so. I think it could benefit from some imagery below your block of text there, just to help break up that empty space.
I prefer the second rough to the first, simply because it seems more fleshed out. Looking forward to seeing the final!
These are some nice clean designs you've got started here.
I think the first design is a little bit too minimal unfortunately; it looks very similar to what the mobile version of a website might look like. There's not quite enough substance in it for a desktop site though.
Your second design works a little bit better; again, very minimalist, but not overpoweringly so. I think it could benefit from some imagery below your block of text there, just to help break up that empty space.
I prefer the second rough to the first, simply because it seems more fleshed out. Looking forward to seeing the final!
Ryan Segal
Radical Boy on a Mission
Radical Boy on a Mission