Re: Project One Final
Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2014 5:04 pm
This one's looking pretty good.
The design of this site has a serenity to it. Like watching a ladybug perch on a flower. The transparency on the main content container works really well. The nature scene and red flower really set the tone. Great use of color and repetition. Contrast too. The red and black work well together. I like the font choices as well, a warm serif and whimsical script really play nicely together. They give it a feel of a warm spring day spent sketching in a notebook. Great use of color, photography and type to induce warm feelings in the viewer
I see a few things that it could do better though. The buttons should have been sized to the largest word. Because they are not, "resources" looks really crowded. Also, I'm not fond of all the dashes on the paragraph, turn off hyphenation on your justification next time. Lastly it needs a little work on margins. The spacing above and below the bodycopy block is different, it should be the same. There should be more room between the edges of the script type at the bottom and the content container.
A warm comfortable little website. Nice work.
The design of this site has a serenity to it. Like watching a ladybug perch on a flower. The transparency on the main content container works really well. The nature scene and red flower really set the tone. Great use of color and repetition. Contrast too. The red and black work well together. I like the font choices as well, a warm serif and whimsical script really play nicely together. They give it a feel of a warm spring day spent sketching in a notebook. Great use of color, photography and type to induce warm feelings in the viewer
I see a few things that it could do better though. The buttons should have been sized to the largest word. Because they are not, "resources" looks really crowded. Also, I'm not fond of all the dashes on the paragraph, turn off hyphenation on your justification next time. Lastly it needs a little work on margins. The spacing above and below the bodycopy block is different, it should be the same. There should be more room between the edges of the script type at the bottom and the content container.
A warm comfortable little website. Nice work.