Re: Dalanie's Project 3 preliminary work
Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2014 10:50 am
Hm. I prefer your first design to your second.
Your first design has a strong geometric layout, with nice use of contrast. The content is easy to see and read and the navigation is large and easy to follow. It also has a nice use of color (props on making TMCC's ugly green actually work). I also like the vector paintbrush idea.
Lose the white boxes though. They clash and look dropped in. Your gray is light enough that your copyright should show up fine and you can make your navigation text white against the black column behind it. Also, I don't think you need the script type, a good sans-serif will do. Also, shrink your bodycopy two font sizes, right justify it and give a little more left and right margin. Lastly, try looking some subtle drop shadows to pop your layout off the gray background. Swap your vector paintbrush for things that are more graphics oriented (x-acto knives, rulers, lockup marks, color bars, HTML samples, etc.). Maybe use a different vector shape for each page/category.
You've got the makings of something really nice here. Keep working on it.
Your first design has a strong geometric layout, with nice use of contrast. The content is easy to see and read and the navigation is large and easy to follow. It also has a nice use of color (props on making TMCC's ugly green actually work). I also like the vector paintbrush idea.
Lose the white boxes though. They clash and look dropped in. Your gray is light enough that your copyright should show up fine and you can make your navigation text white against the black column behind it. Also, I don't think you need the script type, a good sans-serif will do. Also, shrink your bodycopy two font sizes, right justify it and give a little more left and right margin. Lastly, try looking some subtle drop shadows to pop your layout off the gray background. Swap your vector paintbrush for things that are more graphics oriented (x-acto knives, rulers, lockup marks, color bars, HTML samples, etc.). Maybe use a different vector shape for each page/category.
You've got the makings of something really nice here. Keep working on it.