Re: Final Critique for Project 1
Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2015 3:48 pm
Nice one, Yoshiki. Nice one indeed.
This design continues it's clean whimsy. It looks like a parody of a transit sign or in-flight manual. The colors play off of and compliment one another well. The clean lines of the drawings lend themselves to easy understanding. The font is well chosen and compliments the design as well. It has excellent margin and an easy to follow layout. Plus, I think "About me" is whispering at me, but I can't make out what he's saying.
I would like to have seen a bit of text about you and some college and class information, but it's a hell of a good start.
Great work, sir. I look forward to seeing it in action.
This design continues it's clean whimsy. It looks like a parody of a transit sign or in-flight manual. The colors play off of and compliment one another well. The clean lines of the drawings lend themselves to easy understanding. The font is well chosen and compliments the design as well. It has excellent margin and an easy to follow layout. Plus, I think "About me" is whispering at me, but I can't make out what he's saying.
I would like to have seen a bit of text about you and some college and class information, but it's a hell of a good start.
Great work, sir. I look forward to seeing it in action.