This is it -project 1 final critique

[ravennvrmre]

The moving sticky notes are just to show you the hover or rollover state. And ya warren I liked the handwritten font throughout but it was just too hard to read in the body(sad face). And I’m going with the top (final) the other two are the roughs so you guys could see the difference/ improvements I made. And yes the paper for the body copy is currently kicking my but in Dreamweaver, half looks nice and lines up perfectly and half of it cuts through my words, so I might just underline it to give the same illusion. I’m not sure yet but thank you all for your comments and suggestions.