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Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#2
Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2015 8:14 pm
by ravennvrmre
I think both could work, I don’t really have a preference between the two. For the top design, I know you added the white stroke (or found) on the black type, to read it better against the image in the background but it’s still a little hard to read. Great start though.
Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#2
Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2015 3:52 pm
by Game of Potters
I like the top layout more. The colors in the image tie in well with your type and make the website feel very dynamic. I would suggest changing the image for each page, but try to keep the colors in the images similar, the golden brown looks great with the layout and type.
Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#2
Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2015 5:38 pm
by nicolemae09
In your second design I like how the image bleeds into the background color. The first background just kind of looks busy with the drop shadowed text on it. If you liked the first I would suggest taking out that drop shadow.
Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#2
Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2015 8:29 pm
by moserary
As a history nut and a person who does hand crafts, my preference is the second one. The finished items are missing, perhaps they could be included in the layout of the bench, maybe on a table nearby..? I also prefer the color scheme.