Re: Project 1 Prelim
Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2018 2:54 pm
Hi Jackal,
The designs I like the most are the mobile yellow version and the black desktop version. I like these ones for the use of space, it leads my eyes because of the proximity and the use of lines that are separating each of the grouped elements. To improve upon either, you might consider using a different image for the desktop -black cat with black background looks strange to me and the yellow on yellow could be more overt because it is a cool logo for your name.
Best,
Rachel
The designs I like the most are the mobile yellow version and the black desktop version. I like these ones for the use of space, it leads my eyes because of the proximity and the use of lines that are separating each of the grouped elements. To improve upon either, you might consider using a different image for the desktop -black cat with black background looks strange to me and the yellow on yellow could be more overt because it is a cool logo for your name.
Best,
Rachel