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Re: Project 01 roughs
Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 6:27 pm
by Zera-Chann
I really like the beach layout it feels relax i would just say play with your body copy more its kinda hard to read.
Goodluck!!
Re: Project 01 roughs
Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 7:46 pm
by Tickosity
I like how nice and simple they all look, they aren't cluttered and aren't too busy to distract the eye. I would say however that the last one the color of the type is a little too light and maybe could use some more contrast.
Re: Project 01 roughs
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2018 5:36 pm
by tandyg
Hi Yuri-
Your designs really clean and organized. I would consider the App and Web with the tower in the background and the web design with the photo of the lady. I like the mellow use of the colors to create a calming to the content. I would look at different font type to create interest and emphasis the content.