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Re: project I Roughs
Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 5:44 pm
by giusti56
I really like the sunflower design, and have no critique for it. I like the simple black, white, and grey with a splash of yellow from the flower. It has a very warm feel and it is visually pleasing.
Re: project I Roughs
Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 5:51 pm
by Zera-Chann
I love the colors of the first one but the layout of the second one is doing a whole lot better
Best of luck!
Re: project I Roughs
Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 8:13 pm
by Tickosity
I really enjoy the playfulness of your first site, it is fun and inviting. However if I have one critique it would be that it is a bit busy and crowded.
Re: project I Roughs
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2018 5:28 pm
by tandyg
Is it possible to post the text layout with the second layout background? This would be so great and fill the negative space of the first layout. They are both equally great in different aspects that could probably work together. Thanks.