Preliminary work

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elizabeth_mejia
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Re: Preliminary work

Post by elizabeth_mejia »

These are both really great designs! I really like the second one because the color choices look so nice and clean and the buttons are easy to see where they are so it would make a good website to navigate on. The detail on the buttons are very awesome. The only thing I would suggest for the first design would be the amount of text there is. There seems to be a lot of text maybe add a picture of yourself where some of the text is, that way it doesn't seem so overwhelming.
-Elizabeth Mejia-

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eric_sallender
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Re: Preliminary work

Post by eric_sallender »

I'm loving the freeform composition you created in the 1st design. I'm looking forward to seeing this completed :)
^.^~Eric Sallender~^.^

Dangerous_Preteen
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Re: Preliminary work

Post by Dangerous_Preteen »

both designs are very good. i like the oriental layout more, but i feel like the other layout makes more sense when it comes to page structure… the navigation just seems more user friendly i guess.

oasib
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Re: Preliminary work

Post by oasib »

Nice roughs! You always do very good work! very artistic! I see more you in the first design, and it also visually interesting to look at, I like the sense of movement that the fish teals create. The only thing that I might work with is alignment of the text and maybe play with the border that you have around your page, expend it to the right to interact more with fish and have less of the closed in filling. I like the white option background, the way the black fish color pops against the white background. Great artwork!
Overall, Good Job! I think it would come out great!
Amy (oasib)

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