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Re: Project One Preliminary Critique
Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 4:26 pm
by Game of Potters
The second one is my favorite, especially with the explosion in the background. (Hah.) I do think that you've gone a bit too far with the textured backgrounds. I don't think you should get rid of it, but maybe lighten it up a bit so that the clear focus is on the artwork and imagery. Where are you gonna put your links? I would say that you should just add a bottom navigation bar so that it doesn't interfere with the awesome rage you have going.
Re: Project One Preliminary Critique
Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 4:31 pm
by Stalksyouatnight
Both of them are really interesting, but lack everything but a background. No navigation bar, or the other things, I'm sure you were just focusing on the background , but if you do add boxes, buttons, and text will you consider making them as creative as the background?
Re: Project One Preliminary Critique
Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 5:48 pm
by nikkihillman
Both are nice, I definitely see your personality in these designs. I think the second one is a neat idea, I enjoy the little profile picture.
Re: Project One Preliminary Critique
Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 8:11 pm
by punkassbookjockey
I like the one with the cat, but I'm not sure what either says about you. Probably don't want "nerd rage" in a portfolio website...