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Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#1
Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 3:47 pm
by Oreo_Chaos
seems like you really know what your doing, the 1st makes me want to you to have a steam punk motif
Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#1
Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 4:19 pm
by Game of Potters
You worked really hard on the bicycle design, and it shows! The color and layout are clean, but the illustrations make it fun and interesting! It's my favorite of the two. The only thing I would change is to add some opacity to the body copy area so that we can see a bit of the texture underneath, but just a little bit, otherwise it will become too hard to read.
Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#1
Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 4:24 pm
by papasmurf124
The first one would be my choice looks entertaining for sure. I would make the image on the left just a little bigger.
Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#1
Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 4:33 pm
by Stalksyouatnight
I like the first one more, you are doing more with the space provided. The buttons are great looking and so does the site, I don't know what to suggest because it does what it does well and easy. If you went with the second one I'd suggest giving more to the eye to enjoy.