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prelim_#3

Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2015 9:02 pm
by Ka80kins
In my first layout I made it simple but straight to the point. I am finishing my other rough but I can't wrap my head around how to finish it. So ill post the second one tomorrow. I am trying to make my roughs different so the first one is simple and the second one will be complex in the design aspect.

Re: prelim_#3

Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2015 3:56 pm
by j.alexis93
It seems like a rough design, but I get a clear idea what you're going for. I think you should use photos of TMCC instead of Reno.

Re: prelim_#3

Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2015 3:57 pm
by daveryjones
I think you have a good idea but I don't have anything to compare it to. One suggestion is that I would not center align your body copy. Maybe justify with the last line aligned left. Good start, my friend.

Re: prelim_#3

Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2015 9:13 pm
by lsimgrc175
I like the second one because of the big GRC, which also covers a lot of the brown half of the landscape, but you can still look at it if you want to.

Re: prelim_#3

Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2015 10:08 am
by warren.asher@gmail.com
I like the second one better, and I like the transparency on your navigation bar. I would reccomend changing the justify center on the body copy. I think it work better with justify right or put into two columns

Re: prelim_#3

Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2015 1:42 pm
by japanese_panda
I like your ideas on navigation button. but if you put black on hoover button and put white type on button, it will make low readability.

Pick same value color!

Re: prelim_#3

Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:12 pm
by Blackfïsk
Shrink the navigation so it only takes up the header image, i like the transparency. The grey bottom is very boring, just make it white and play with your typography.

Re: prelim_#3

Posted: Sat Nov 21, 2015 1:04 pm
by sierra_style
I like your second layout more. Very interesting to look at, but the body copy could be laid out more exciting with images and what not. Very nice work though!

Re: prelim_#3

Posted: Sat Nov 21, 2015 2:28 pm
by Ka80kins
This is my second set of roughs, sorry I didn't post sooner.

Re: prelim_#3

Posted: Sat Nov 21, 2015 3:20 pm
by nicolemae09
I am liking the second layout more. There is just move visual interest to it which i think is important for a graphics program page. I think the placements can be worked with of the text. The instructors text and the navigation bar on the home page are just in odd spots.