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project I Roughs

Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2018 9:43 pm
by agostina_renau
Hi! It's Agostina.

Inspirational websites:

https://www.femmefatale.paris/en for the design and interactivity

https://ilovetypography.com/ for the grid layout and content

ps don't mind the color palette

Re: project I Roughs

Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2018 9:54 pm
by emilyduke
Hey Agostina!

I am definitely drawn to the first two designs, I love the light colors against the white and that colorful side bar/design on the left. I think the different type styles are really interesting and work well together. I would suggest getting rid of the constraints of the white box and just let your type design take up all of the space of the page and same for the mobile design!

Re: project I Roughs

Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:29 pm
by tweetysmurf2350
I am really attracted to the curves and angles of the first two designs. They are very eye catching and interesting. Nice work!

Hope this helps,
Terri

Re: project I Roughs

Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2018 7:43 pm
by jason_hosier
Wow, I love how whimsical your design style gets. I like the first set but the second seems more appropriate for the project even though less of your personality comes through. its more subdued and minimalist which I appreciate. you are off to a great start and I look forward to seeing what this turns into.

Re: project I Roughs

Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2018 7:55 pm
by Drakula
Hello Augostina,

I love the flow of your work. Both of your designs are pleasing to the eye, but I prefer the second designs. it's so simple but has a realistic texture, I feel like I could pull the paper off the screen. Great work!

Re: project I Roughs

Posted: Fri Sep 14, 2018 12:43 am
by veronica chapman
Ooohhh... I love the sunflowers. great play with the black and white/color!

Re: project I Roughs

Posted: Fri Sep 14, 2018 9:48 am
by Jaime Ramey
HI Augostina,
I really like the colors and the design of your website page. It caught my eye and made me stop and look at it. I also like the sunflower. :) Nice job!
Jaime

Re: project I Roughs

Posted: Fri Sep 14, 2018 12:16 pm
by kj923
Hello! I really enjoy your design with the sunflower! It adds the perfect amount of color in your design.

For your first design, if your background is the plain grey, then I would suggest maybe switching up the layout. I feel like its too much blank space. But if your design is just inside the white shape then, I really like the creativity and layout of it!

Good job!

Re: project I Roughs

Posted: Fri Sep 14, 2018 8:33 pm
by evexhouses
Wow you're amazing with typography, The first one is definitely my favorite. The colors are very nicely chosen and the layout is different than your usual website which I really appreciate. You should try giving it a darker background so that it pops a bit more!

Re: project I Roughs

Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2018 1:53 pm
by Jones
The last two options are easier on my eyes. I like the images you chose. The first two are neat with how you've used typography as an image. Can you give the words more space so it's easier to read at a glance? Well done btw.