Rough roughs for judgment 1 0f 2

[tandyg]

I like the simple layout because it looks really organized. I do feel like it's missing some elements.
Simple Sample.https://lebalto.de/2007/12/jardins-passerelles/
My progress. Took the red out. Working with gradients and shapes with this layout. I like the typewriter keys with my name. <3

[veronica chapman]

I really like this layout, but I think you should bring some of the red back.....it can be muted or diffused....but I think it would make your design really pop.

[anayaestevan]

Hey Tandy,

I like the direction this is going! Has a gothic feel to it! I think the bordered boxes and serif typefaces are serving you better.

Body copy is really small for me, and especially on a small screen will be hard to read. I like the image in the background however I think it might serve you better to darken it up and make it contrast with the foreground. Keep up the good work!

[agostina_renau]

this looks very elegant. I think you can play with hierarchy a little more.

[hiitsyuri24]

Hi!
I like how you put your name. That is really cool. I would suggest to make projects bigger. They are hard to see.

[Big_DaDdy]

Hey Tandy. Nice background image, however, the resolution seems low (pixelated).
Maybe try planning with hierarchy of your layout to control the viewers eye.

[raton de biblioteca]

Hi Tandy,

For this one, I am loving how you have flipped the typical design on its head! Can't really think of an improvement point, maybe add a different texture or highlight to the monogram name that you have created to make it a stand-out focal point.

Best,

Rachel

[Zera-Chann]

I like what you have so for far abut i only see one design and i can't give my critique really.......WHEN DID SUDDENLY BECOME DAN?!?!

Well anyways, Best of luck to you!