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Rough roughs for judgment 1 0f 2
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2018 10:31 pm
by tandyg
I like the simple layout because it looks really organized. I do feel like it's missing some elements.
Simple Sample.
https://lebalto.de/2007/12/jardins-passerelles/
My progress.
Took the red out. Working with gradients and shapes with this layout. I like the
typewriter keys with my name.
<3
Re: Rough roughs for judgment 1 0f 2
Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2018 6:18 pm
by veronica chapman
I really like this layout, but I think you should bring some of the red back.....it can be muted or diffused....but I think it would make your design really pop.
Re: Rough roughs for judgment 1 0f 2
Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2018 6:41 pm
by anayaestevan
Hey Tandy,
I like the direction this is going! Has a gothic feel to it! I think the bordered boxes and serif typefaces are serving you better.
Body copy is really small for me, and especially on a small screen will be hard to read. I like the image in the background however I think it might serve you better to darken it up and make it contrast with the foreground. Keep up the good work!
Re: Rough roughs for judgment 1 0f 2
Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 12:13 pm
by agostina_renau
this looks very elegant. I think you can play with hierarchy a little more.
Re: Rough roughs for judgment 1 0f 2
Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 3:15 pm
by hiitsyuri24
Hi!
I like how you put your name. That is really cool. I would suggest to make projects bigger. They are hard to see.
Re: Rough roughs for judgment 1 0f 2
Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 3:19 pm
by Big_DaDdy
Hey Tandy. Nice background image, however, the resolution seems low (pixelated).
Maybe try planning with hierarchy of your layout to control the viewers eye.
Re: Rough roughs for judgment 1 0f 2
Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 4:36 pm
by raton de biblioteca
Hi Tandy,
For this one, I am loving how you have flipped the typical design on its head! Can't really think of an improvement point, maybe add a different texture or highlight to the monogram name that you have created to make it a stand-out focal point.
Best,
Rachel
Re: Rough roughs for judgment 1 0f 2
Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 5:39 pm
by Zera-Chann
I like what you have so for far abut i only see one design and i can't give my critique really.......WHEN DID SUDDENLY BECOME DAN?!?!
Well anyways, Best of luck to you!