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Project 1 Drafts

Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 2:22 pm
by Aplzskins
I was inspired by http://www.andreasknutsson.com. When tested on a computer and a cellphone it converted well and was a simple design using mostly black and white. I was also inspired by the style of http://www.getblk.com because though it is simple, it used gradients and overlapping throughout the composition.

Re: Project 1 Drafts

Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 2:39 pm
by matt
Hi April,

I get to be the first to comment on your post yay! Both are visually interesting and I like both designs, but if I had to choose I would pick the second layout. To me it seems more open to different ideas.
Keep up the good work!

Re: Project 1 Drafts

Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 3:07 pm
by hiitsyuri24
Hi! My favorite one is the first one. I like how you used image. I would suggest to work on your paragraph. Maybe you can find different font or make look nicer.

Re: Project 1 Drafts

Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 3:26 pm
by Big_DaDdy
Hi April,

Looking at your first one, feels like a lot of green to me. I do like the pose of you with your camera, however, the photo looks low resolution.
I like the second one the best.

Re: Project 1 Drafts

Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 5:00 pm
by emilyduke
Hey!

I like the colors in the second layout, although it seems a little unfinished whereas the first layout has a lot of nice pieces in it!

Re: Project 1 Drafts

Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 5:04 pm
by giusti56
Hello, I like the second design with the camera more. I think a more expressive font and maybe two different fonts would help the overall composition of the page.

Re: Project 1 Drafts

Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 5:17 pm
by Zera-Chann
Love the first one! The are very nice, not too bright but not to dark. I would say play with the your body copy typestyle it just seems a little to boring for me personally.

Good luck!!

Re: Project 1 Drafts

Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 6:19 pm
by agostina_renau
hi April.
I like the first design better because it has more going on, rather than just a blue plain background.

Re: Project 1 Drafts

Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 6:33 pm
by Stasiavous
I really like the first design. It's fresh and clean and professional looking. I would play around with the typeface a bit!

Re: Project 1 Drafts

Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 7:05 pm
by raton de biblioteca
Hi April,

I really like the images used on the first set of layouts, they have a nice depth to them. I think as an improvement the spacing between could be links could be emphasized as being separate buttons.

Best,

Rachel