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web project 1 final version
Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2018 4:33 pm
by jason_hosier
Here are two references and my final uploads for project 1. I changed the design of the buttons to match the theme better and worked on the margins a bit but if anyone has any constructive criticism about how this can be improved I would love to hear it. Thanks.
html css 101 tutorial
[youtube]
https://youtu.be/y3UH2gAhwPI/youtube]
don't fear the internet tutorial
http://www.dontfeartheinternet.com/08-layout/
Re: web project 1 final version
Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2018 9:44 pm
by kayla.pressburger
I really like the artwork you used as your background, it makes it really unique. My only suggestion is to make the boxes behind your bodycopy the same color. I think the gray on your mobile version looks nicer than the black on your web version. Nice work!
Re: web project 1 final version
Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2018 7:26 am
by Drakula
Hey Jason,
I really enjoy how abstract your layout is. It's very simple and easy to understand, but very interesting. I feel like it would be a great home page to an art gallery or something along those lines. Great job!
Re: web project 1 final version
Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2018 11:18 am
by tandyg
I like the red and black emphasis of the links compared to the animated background. Really like the contrast and interest.
Re: web project 1 final version
Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2018 1:59 pm
by emilyduke
Hey! These are awesome! Very unique, I love the art and I like the transparency of all of the boxes, it gives it a clean feeling.
Re: web project 1 final version
Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2018 3:51 pm
by matt
YESSSSS!!!!
I Like it! I like the texturing that you did with the artwork. I like the layout. doesn't feel cluttered. I also like your color choices. I'd the home button smaller and think about type and hierarchy to emphasis what you want the viewer to see first. Great job on this Jason!
Re: web project 1 final version
Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2018 6:37 pm
by Jackal
Hi Jason!!
I really like how your buttons seem like video game controller buttons, it would've been cool if the other buttons were in the same style, though I like the different colored orbs. Super cool!!
Re: web project 1 final version
Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2018 3:13 pm
by anayaestevan
Jason,
Some big improvements here! Digging the art in the background. Much better color scheme too.
Only complaint I have is that your navigation is not intuitive. Are the elements at the bottom supposed to be your links to your other pages? That should be a little more clear.
Re: web project 1 final version
Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 10:51 am
by Jones
Really interesting image, very unique. Is that your work? The only thing I'd suggest is moving the image over a bit to the left on the computer version. Outside of that I really enjoy the freshness and individual style you brought to this project! Also... color scheme is rad.
Re: web project 1 final version
Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 3:38 pm
by tweetysmurf2350
I really like the texture you created with the artwork in the background. It’s really playful and fun.