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Project one Final

Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2018 9:49 pm
by tandyg
Two sites that I would aspire to be able to design and use ideas from include these two. I posted prior sites on other comments.
https://www.nationalgeographic.com/
http://www.mtv.com/

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eGvT1L3Uy4s
I did visit countless sites and listened to endless tutorials on placement and link ideas. I hope to get better as time progresses in this course. Thanks for your time and interest.

Re: Project one Final

Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2018 7:31 am
by Drakula
Hey Tandy,

I love your name logo, its very clever. I like visuals, the mobile version stands out the most to me. I like how you added the red transparency, it really puts the page together. Great job!

Re: Project one Final

Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2018 2:01 pm
by emilyduke
Hey! These designs have improved so much! I like how you simplified them and I think the way you styled your name is interesting.

Re: Project one Final

Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2018 8:30 pm
by jason_hosier
Tandy, looks like you put a lot of work into this one. On your web version The TMCC logo is gigantic. you could use the space to emphasize your own design elements instead of leaving it there like a billboard for TMCC.

Re: Project one Final

Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 1:42 pm
by Jones
Fun images and nice calming color pallet. Perhaps make the circular image on the mobil design could be bigger and more eye grabbing? I found your name a little difficult to read, maybe make the letters bigger so it's easer so recognize at a glance? Over all I like the flow and vibe of your pages! Well done!

Re: Project one Final

Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 3:01 pm
by hiitsyuri24
I really like how you put your name! That is really cool!! Maybe you could move the numbers little in computer version so they are on same line.

Re: Project one Final

Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 3:20 pm
by tweetysmurf2350
Your name and logo is very eye catching. It is definitely different. I like the over all fee of your designs. Good job!

Re: Project one Final

Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 5:18 pm
by giusti56
Both designs have a very interesting look to them and draw my attention to the page. I like the mobile version a little more though.

Re: Project one Final

Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 5:59 pm
by anayaestevan
Tandy,

Designs are greatly improved here. I like the neutral color scheme. And fonts work here.

Alignments on the desktop version are bugging me. Clean those up and I think you're good!

Re: Project one Final

Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 8:22 pm
by Jackal
Hi Tandy!

I really like what you did with your name, it's so unique! I would try to stay consistent between your web and mobile design, the mobile one looks to different with the red color scheme. Cool background tho, nice job!!