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Projecto Uno Final
Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2018 10:15 pm
by Big_DaDdy
Wasn't feeling my first two designs so I created something completely different. I felt this is cleaner, easy to navigate and colors flow nicely.
The only thing I would take out would be the paragraph of self but I know it's required.
What are your thoughts?
I really liked these blogs on creativity of clean design:
https://www.dtelepathy.com/blog/inspira ... nspiration
https://apiumhub.com/tech-blog-barcelon ... b-designs/
Re: Projecto Uno Final
Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2018 6:23 pm
by Drakula
Hey Jason,
Your picture is so cool, nice technique! I like what you did with your layout, it's very clean and modern. Your logo is an interesting touch, while subtle it's effective. Great job!!
Re: Projecto Uno Final
Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2018 1:35 pm
by emilyduke
Hey! This is awesome, it looks like its already a website! I think you could even use the original image unedited of you because the rest of the design looks so clean and crisp, but either way it looks great!
Re: Projecto Uno Final
Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2018 9:21 pm
by jason_hosier
simple concept well executed. Why did you use two different styles of alignment in your body copy on the web version? it looks like it anyway
Re: Projecto Uno Final
Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2018 10:33 pm
by evexhouses
I really love this idea! The layout is fresh and clean, and the texture effect that you used on your photo is awesome! Great job!
Re: Projecto Uno Final
Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2018 4:05 pm
by anayaestevan
Jason,
Like the improved layout! Your logo is nice and everything is easy to read.
Be careful with your alignments. Social media icons look a bit off. What is the reason you added that effect to your portrait. I find it confusing and a bit distracting.
Re: Projecto Uno Final
Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 10:45 am
by Jones
The image is attention grabbing and the design is strong and well balanced. It is easy to read and navigate. The color choices are great.
Re: Projecto Uno Final
Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 3:43 pm
by tweetysmurf2350
Can I just say that I love that picture of you! It looks so amazing and the knockout nature of it just adds to the design! Good work!
Re: Projecto Uno Final
Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 9:08 pm
by Jackal
Hi Jason!
I like that you went with a brand new layout, I think it represents you and your style really well. Only thing I would say is to make sure your social media icons are aligned, nice job!!
Re: Projecto Uno Final
Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 8:49 pm
by agostina_renau
I have the feeling I already commented on your design, no?
I like the huge jump and difference between the preliminary and this!! so much better!
keep it up big daddy.