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Project 1 Final

Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2018 10:49 pm
by Aplzskins
Happy Friday All!

This is my final design layout. I took the advice from the preliminary: add a more exciting (expressive) font, and change my image.
It was really important to me to have a simple clean design with a bit of personality.

These are the website inspiration/tutorials:
https://coder-coder.com/layout-design-website/
https://neilpatel.com/blog/website-clean-simple-design/

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2018 9:38 pm
by jason_hosier
Looks great April, I like how you use the dark space in different degrees on the mobile versus web versions. Your use of different fonts works well too.

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2018 8:42 am
by Instructor
You've got a real nice aesthetic going here, April. I like the immediate headspace the image puts me in. A creative's desk on an overcast day. Perfect for sketching up the next great ad campaign. You also use contrast really well throughout your design, obviously with the black and white, but with how the blue interacts with them as well. Your colors are well chosen and reflect your image nicely. The black and white provide the hard edge and eye catching parts, while the blue softens everything. I like your type too. The sans-serif and script types play well with each other and establish a clean, creative feel. Very much a studio website design. Your navigation is large and easy to find and use and works well with the rest of your composition.

Your margins around your blue text box are way too tight. It's too close to both your "about" text at the top and your "As a Designer ..." text at the bottom. Also, your mobile design's blanace is all out of whack. It is very bottom heavy. Everything feels crammed into the bottom two thirds of the layout.

Nice work!

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2018 3:01 pm
by anayaestevan
Hey April,

Really digging the color scheme and overall layout! Has a very "oregon" feel to it.

Be careful about minor alignments! I like the script font for your name, but I would like it more if it was slightly more readable.

Otherwise, great job

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2018 4:22 pm
by Drakula
Hello April,

Your layout make me want to get to work, or hire someone. It's a very smart design and it looks like you're creating inside the box just fine! Great job!

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 10:41 am
by Jones
I like the image and layout. It would be cool if you could make the circles look like coffee stains from the cup. Well done! The page has a sophisticated feel to it.

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 3:48 pm
by tweetysmurf2350
I love the image of the workspace. I would do something like that for mine, but my deal is fugly. I love the over all feel of the design. It makes me feel like home somehow.

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 6:52 pm
by emilyduke
Hey! These are really great, the whole design feels really clean and well put together. I love the typography!

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 8:31 pm
by Jackal
Hi April!

I love the overall feel of your website and your color choices are super nice! I would maybe do something with your name so it stands out a little more and isn't so flat. Nice job!!

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 8:38 pm
by agostina_renau
nicely done!! I love the color scheme.