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My site...
Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2011 10:32 pm
by Ravana
Re: My site...
Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 12:28 am
by smith206
I think your site should have content when you load it. It just looks empty and unfinished because there is just the navigation and a blank sheet. Maybe you could start off on the info page or add some kind of graphic, could be a subtle one since it looks like that is what you are going for but something is needed imo. Otherwise looks good.
Re: My site...
Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 2:21 am
by MadBroChadBro
I really like the simplicity of it and how clean it looks. I do agree with Kyle, that when it loads there should be something there. I think overall it is really good. I love the rollover buttons and the color choices with them. Nice job!
Re: My site...
Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 9:04 am
by Ravana
So, I've added a little something on initial load. (A quote from a book I like.) Also, I thinned up the copy area and made the font a bit smaller, while giving the nav a touch more space up top. Also, I made the links in my info section (which are really just supposed to be subtle additions to what I'm saying anyway - some amusing, some informative) a little more "easter egg-y" by removing the underline from them.
Thanks for the feedback!
Re: My site...
Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 2:38 pm
by smith206
Yeah it looks much more complete on first load now. I didn't even notice the links in your info section before but that is a cool idea definitely grabs your attention once you discover it.
Project 1 - Larry Rubald
Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 5:07 pm
by Ravana
Here's my project 1 website for grading and critiquing....
http://grc175.com/student/fall_2011/lawrence_rubald/
@instructor: feel free to consolidate this thread with this one:
http://www.grc175.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=137
Re: Project 1 - Larry Rubald
Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 5:55 pm
by brienicole
I do like the cleanness of it. I think that the link titles could be a bit closer to the icons, but it turned out nicely!
Re: Project 1 - Larry Rubald
Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 6:42 pm
by smith206
I just posted on your site earlier today but ill reiterate. I like the links in the info text and the clean look of your site. Looks great
Re: Project 1 - Larry Rubald
Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 6:49 pm
by miss_kristine
I think you've executed you concept fabulously. I love the simplicity of the overall look, and the pops of color in the rollovers. I do agree that the type should be a little closer to the buttons.
Re: Project 1 - Larry Rubald
Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 9:03 pm
by jfotodesign
dude this is awesome. i like its simpleness and cleanness, looks European-esk mayby make the type on the buttons bigger but not too much