Project One Final Critique

[trixiapanda]

Hello, my dudes. It is I, Trixia Benitez.

Here are the chosen and final layouts of my website and the mobile version of my website. I appreciate all the critiques you guys have given me from the preliminary (previous) critique. Some of you guys suggest that I choose the second version, but because I wanted my website to be more modern and trendy, I chose the first version. Plus, I like what's happening on the layout of the first version. I did some slight changes, such as adding my own logo and changing the TMCC logo to white (since y'all saying the green is ugly). On the mobile layout, I took off the low-transparent black text box and used common-left (and right-edge for the TMCC info) because that's what Prof. Michael critiqued me on... and I'm just tryna get a good grade here. I am happy with what I chose and finalized, and I hope you guys like it too!

The two useful informational websites that I have learned from are:

- https://www.canva.com/learn/portfolio/
- https://www.aiga.org/4-easy-steps-to-cr ... -portfolio

These websites helped me understand more on layouts and what to put on your website. It talks about what you should do and what you should showcase. The websites basically gave out tips on how to make your website more eye-catching and more professional. In fact, the second link is from AIGA... so you know what's up.

[itsdrrlcarden]

Your final is very cute and looks representative of you. Great font choice!

[trixiapanda]

b r e a t h t a k i n g

[katyroses]

Hii Trixia,
I love your design! It is BREATHTAKING! Your typography is gorgeous and the imagery fits perfectly with it. It is certainly a harmonious design. Great job!!

[Abused Oreo]

I love how this design turned out. Although I didn't think it was very necessary I like the logo you added to the design. The type is very clan and easy to read. I really like the back ground image you have. Great work!

[tandyg]

HI Trixia,
What a killer layout! The type is really light to the background but the images are heavenly. I would think that the clouds would just float in the interactive, creating the mesmerizing gif of the strolling clouds in the background. Great website.

[NalaniN]

Hi Trixia,

I really like your logo, and I like how everything (fonts, colors, photo, hearts) comes together to make a really fun and inviting page.
It's... what's a good word...

...breathtaking!!!

[adriannageo]

Hi Trixia, your website is an actual website. Everything about it looks amazing and so professional. The colors in it are so light and pretty. Amazing job!

[Fear The Deer]

Hi Trixia!

I love the font you used for your name, I think it does a great job of grabbing attention while still being light and decorative, so it keeps the same feeling as the clouds in the background. Nice job!

[Instructor]

Ah. You went with the super professional looking one. Excellent!

It really does have a great modern, clean look. This design is one of the most professional looking websites I've seen for this project. It feels very "current" to me. Well done! I think what really sells it is your excellent image choice. It's still calming and soft focus. I gotta say I like the introduction with a touch of color in your logo. it makes your logo an instant eye grabber in this relatively soft focus design. Your type is still doing great work too. I really like that script type you use for your name in particular. It highlights your name and draws the eye tot it with it's size. Great use of your header and footer on your mobile version to frame your content. Your new alignments are razor sharp and do a great job of making edges and patterns where there are none.

I probably would have left the white header in on your mobile version.

Nice job!