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final_critique_genesis_p01
Posted: Fri Sep 27, 2019 10:53 am
by genesis_urena
Hello all!
Here are my two final versions. I chose the black and white version. I worked on the contrast between the body and the background. I did some changes in the nav bar as well. Gotta admit the computer layout was kind of hard because the picture I chose was not big enough. Thanks for your feedback.
Useful & inspirational LINKS:
https://designshack.net/articles/graphi ... eb-design/
https://www.webdesignerdepot.com/2013/1 ... tic-sites/
Re: final_critique_genesis_p01
Posted: Mon Sep 30, 2019 5:23 pm
by itsdrrlcarden
I love the black and white theme! Its gives it a classic look. I do think that your type is a bit too large in the body copy. But overall great design.
Re: final_critique_genesis_p01
Posted: Mon Sep 30, 2019 5:27 pm
by trixiapanda
You've made great improvements, Genesis!
I am loving the secondary blurred background! The fonts you chose are cool and I am loving the achromatic palettes! Amazing work!!
Re: final_critique_genesis_p01
Posted: Wed Oct 02, 2019 11:15 am
by katyroses
Hi Genesis,
I really like that you went with the white and black color scheme. It looks really nice and professional. I also enjoy your imagery! Looks great!
Re: final_critique_genesis_p01
Posted: Wed Oct 02, 2019 5:17 pm
by Abused Oreo
Im glad to see you went with the zebra idea! It looks very modern and clean. It looks really good being in black and white. Great work!
Re: final_critique_genesis_p01
Posted: Wed Oct 02, 2019 9:36 pm
by tandyg
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Genesis,
your Flash drive was looking for you the other day. Great way to identify it and make sure it got back to you. Anyways, your website is clean and aesthetically pleasing to me. I would like to see the interactive in the end. Great to see this layout. Thank you for sharing. 
Re: final_critique_genesis_p01
Posted: Thu Oct 03, 2019 11:06 am
by NalaniN
Hi Genesis,
Beautiful layouts! The photos are wonderful and the doubling of the photo on the desktop layout works really well. The typefaces look great with everything too. These turned out very nice!
Re: final_critique_genesis_p01
Posted: Thu Oct 03, 2019 9:27 pm
by adriannageo
Hi Genesis, that picture you chose to go with is very adorable and warming, zebras are amazing. I liked your other color scheme a bit more with the yellow, because I think yellow is such a lively color that contrasts really well with zebras. Even gray and yellow would work really well with each other and balance out pretty well. Otherwise this layout looks really good anyways.
Re: final_critique_genesis_p01
Posted: Thu Oct 03, 2019 10:20 pm
by mack_schneider
Your final design looks nice and clean! I love the way you blurred the background image to make the main one pop! Also, cool logo!
Re: final_critique_genesis_p01
Posted: Fri Oct 04, 2019 2:31 pm
by Fear The Deer
Hi Genesis!
I still love the zebra theme! The double background on the desktop version is cool looking, I think it could be pushed a little more with blurring the parts of the zebra body in the far back picture, so it's completely blurry and the center one is more in focus. Otherwise I love it!