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Project 01 Final
Posted: Fri Feb 28, 2020 8:02 pm
by SkellyboneJones
I decided to stick with the more colorful style, as it suited the illustration better. But in doing so, I noticed I wanted to completely redo the layout of the mobile version as it didn't flow at all with the design motifs I've used. After sectioning the illustration and title font off from the body, I feel like it gave it much better visual hierarchy and the elements just have more room to breathe. I also wanted to add a simple graphic for linking to my twitter and Instagram, so I put placeholder badges there as well.
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2020 3:49 pm
by KJX
Hey
I like how clear your website is and the color usage works well!
Awesome self graphic of yourself as well.
-KJ
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Tue Mar 03, 2020 7:52 pm
by missStormy
I'm impressed with the amount of information you got to fit on your page layouts, especially for mobile. I like the " repair guy" design you have and the illustration you have along with the color scheme fits really well.
Stormy
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Tue Mar 03, 2020 7:55 pm
by meekster_
I enjoy how fun your design is ! the layouts work really nicely and the color choices are also very pleasing!
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2020 5:34 pm
by JamesC46
Hey, nice improvement on the mobile navigation. Thanks for sharing.
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2020 6:50 pm
by darth vader de pot noodle
Если вы конвертируете из Фаренгейта в Цельсий, уравнение конверсии будет (F - 32) / 1,8 = C. Если вы конвертируете из Цельсия в Фаренгейт, уравнение преобразования будет (C * 1,8) + 32 = F.
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your website looks like it was made for a business of installers. It definitely fits your style plus the purple is a nice color to go with.
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2020 8:54 pm
by suiish
I like the way you distributed your information! Your illustration is super nice and the way you flipped both the colors makes it look super nice. Good job!
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2020 6:09 pm
by Instructor
SkellyboneJones strikes again!
I'm still smiling at cartoon you. The way he subtly breaks out of the composition is fun and adds a nice dynamic touch toy your layout. As I mentioned previously, this design is great with contrast between the purple and the white and cartoon you adds a nice splash of color. The shapes and contrast do a great job of moving the eye through your compositions; in an "S" on your mobile layout and in a "C" on your computer layout. Your navigation is easy to see and use and I like the way your hard-edged type contrasts with the smooth lines in your layout.
On your computer layout "HI, I'M TREVOR SIMON" and "AND I MAKE STUFF" are different distances from your diagonal line. It would have looked better if "HI, I'M TREVOR SIMON" was a little further over to the left. They're nicely balanced on your mobile design though.
Nicely done!
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2020 7:40 pm
by Gr8K8
I like what you did with these. I think your mobile version is now a little easier to read and the content feels more evenly distributed. I love how all your text really stands out.
Re: Project 01 Final
Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2020 10:38 am
by wilson_iii
This is awesome! Very eye catching! One thing that kind of bugs me, though, is that this kind of looks like a poster I'd see hanging up somewhere. I think maybe the lack of a header is doing that. Beyond that nitpick, I think you did a great job!