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Project Four Preliminary Critique

Posted: Tue May 04, 2021 10:03 pm
by Arisa
Hello guys!
Those are my ideas.
The first idea moves like a wave down when you scroll. The background photo also changes.
The second idea is to have a man dancing with music, like a GIF animation. He is expressing the joy of art.
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Re: Project Four Preliminary Critique

Posted: Tue May 04, 2021 10:49 pm
by ItsAllisxn
Hi Arisa,

Wow, that texture with the wave looks absolutely stunning. I feel like I could just reach out and touch it, it looks so vibrant. Adding some parallax scrolling to that would look dope. I really like how your navigation button stands out against the background. The text on the web version looks a little bit to close to the wave, so maybe making the text a tad smaller or adding another line of text would work better. The mobile version looks perfect though. Good job!

Re: Project Four Preliminary Critique

Posted: Wed May 05, 2021 8:24 pm
by Kelsey_Reynolds
Hi Arisa! I love the groovy colors of this design, nice work!