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project 03
Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2022 10:39 pm
by yenny
Re: project 03
Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2022 1:20 pm
by Cole_Richards
I really like the start you have, there's not much to comment on but im excited to see where you take it!
Re: project 03
Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2022 9:29 am
by kpargs
Hi, my project felt more complicated than what I ended up with as well, this is a lot to take in, keep going! Its a great start, it does seem a little blocky, but I know you're working on it.
Re: project 03
Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2022 10:29 am
by Mike_Chavez123
You have it going hope it goes great
Re: project 03
Posted: Wed Apr 27, 2022 5:32 pm
by Megan Greaves
This was a tough project to code but I think you can get there. You've put down the foundation. Build the rest if you can; its going to be a very busy rest of semester.
Re: project 03
Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2022 2:33 pm
by Fatkid53
A nice base to start with, some css work still to go but a great beginning. I use Michael's crazy color block method with css when it gives me trouble and it helps.
Re: project 03
Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2022 7:43 pm
by Instructor
I appreciate you for getting SOMETHING up, Yen. Yes there is a lot of work ahead, but I appreciate your effort.
I see you were going for a very clean look here. I like the color scheme you chose. It's bright and summery. Good image choice on the home page as well. It's a good representative meal of what this place serves. You have a layout that's ready for content and imagery. Your navigation is easy to see and use and your type is easy to read.
The whole thing is very plain. I think it would have really benefitted from background images on all your pages. That would have given your content something to play off of. All of the pages need more content as well, both picture and text.
Good effort!
Re: project 03
Posted: Fri Apr 29, 2022 6:40 pm
by Ericha Eberhart
Hi! you have a clean and smooth transition from web to mobile which is awesome! you have a great foundation!
Re: project 03
Posted: Fri Apr 29, 2022 7:11 pm
by Meghna_Misson
Hey Yen,
I like how direct it is to the viewer, but there is not enough items here that I could comment on for this critique; I sort of remember that the original website was quite minimal too, so I can understand how it might've been hard trying to add more to it since there was not enough to work on from the beginning--but I think what would have improved this redesign even further would be by adding a button that links to the previous site so that the audience can view the changes that were made. But other than that, I still think it satisfies the goals for this project, great work!
Re: project 03
Posted: Fri Apr 29, 2022 9:10 pm
by lilykmitch
Hi Yen
I like the colors and layout you have started here. This project was a lot for me too it took me so long to get where i ended up and its nowhere close to the preliminary layouts I made. I think this is coming along well!