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project 2 jose
Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2011 4:44 pm
by jfotodesign
so i lost all my shtuff when my hard drive fail >.< and i was struggling to put it together so this is what i have. . . (ps) be gentle lol
http://www.grc175.com/student/fall_2011 ... project_2/
Re: project 2 jose
Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2011 5:57 pm
by Dave
it's a nice site concept, but the tiled image in the background is kind of annoying....
Re: project 2 jose
Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2011 6:53 pm
by TinaBodden
For losing all your work you still have a good base. I would like to see one background picture instead of it repeating. Also a page title at the top would be a lot more affective.
Re: project 2 jose
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 2:03 pm
by olddragon
Sorry to hear about the hard drive. Not sure how I could cope if it happened to me.
I think you might want to work on the text... the body copy could use an edit... and not centered, also a shorter line length. But I understand you are starting over, and that is as far as you could get.
Re: project 2 jose
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 2:28 pm
by LindsWalters
Your concept came out like you visioned. You pretty much hit the ball on this one. Its readable, and the type is what you would see. in a simple sight.
Re: project 2 jose
Posted: Tue Nov 22, 2011 2:11 pm
by Vi_Vi
It's impressive that you still manage to get your site up and working after your hard drive fails on you. I like the concept on your site, but I agree with Tina, a headline or the title of your site on the top of the page would make your site seems more complete, as well as getting rid of the repeating background.