GRC 175 Learning and Discussion Forum

Hello class, these are my final layouts. Thank you for the feedback. These are links that I found useful when it came to web design.
https://webflow.com/blog/web-page-design
https://www.crazyegg.com/blog/how-desig ... te-layout/

Hello Nick,

Your layouts turned out great, I really like how streamline and easily traversable your page is. I also like your use of negative space and the distribution of the elements throughout the whole page. My only suggestion is removing the outline of the menu options on the orange bar. Aside from that, I believe your designs turned out very well.

Hi Nick,
I love how you went with your favorite sport as you background image, very cool! Your colors are working really well together and I love how you stole the color of the billboard for your big red banner. The only improvement I can see right now would be to make sure that you have the hamburger menu button on both the web and mobile versions for consistency. Either but everything in the menu button as you did with the mobile version, or have everything laid out on the banner as you did with the web version. Really nice job on your design.

Hey Nick!
I am a big fan of the changes you made. The text looks a lot more readable, and I like the layout present in your web layout. If I had to offer you advice, I would remove the hyphenation in your body copy. If you are working in photoshop, Illustrator, or InDesign, there is a little hyphenate button that you can uncheck. Also, I would push your name on the mobile layout a bit more to the left to align your margins. Nice job!

Hi Nick,
I think your use overlapping and creating a straight-forward layout for the design works great! I think it helps everything flow nicely with the eye! Something that I would work on the placement for your hamburger menu, I would maybe suggest moving it to the left side so that it could match better with your website layout. Hope that helps! Awesome work!

Kelsey Bautista

Hey Nick,
Nice work on the final project! I like your style and I think the colors are matching with the picture pretty well. For improvements, I would center the links for the website version and change the typestyle of the body copy. I really like your layout with the picture in the back and how you added the faded look to bother with the layouts. Nice work!

Great job Nick! These layouts look professional and neat. I like the colors you chose. I would maybe make the text on your mobile version a little smaller but overall, great job!

Hi Nick,
I think your final designs came out really nicely. The orange you chose works well with the black background and the image works well within your layout. My only critique is that you could've used more fonts to spice up your design. Overall, nice work!

Hi Nick,
I'm really liking the development of your website, along with the hierarchy. I would make the TMCC a bit smaller .

Hey Nick!

I really love the changes you have made to your design since the last critique. The layout is a lot smoother and neat which makes it very easy to navigate. The white text on the black is also very easy to read which is a big improvement from last time.

Loving this design!