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Project 01 Final

Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2023 3:15 pm
by livitup1
For my final I ended up choosing the green version. I just really liked the colors. It's nothing super intense but I still wanted to keep the minimalistic view with having simple shapes and only the 3 colors.
The mobile version also got an update by my deciding to do a side bar instead of cramming it all in one screen. I'm not the most proud of it still but it is a huge step improvement from my preliminaries
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https://onepagelove.com/alexander-engzell
https://onepagelove.com/kathy-loves-airbnb
^ My inspirational websites

Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2023 10:23 am
by Brooke_Brown
Hello Olivia! I really like the design you decided to go with! I think the green compliments the web layout and i also like the placement of your text

Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2023 3:57 pm
by LMisher
Hello Olivia,

Nice choice of colors in this version. It is clean, easy to navigate and well designed. Good job!

Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2023 10:04 am
by Giselle
Hi Olivia!
I love the design you chose to move forward with project two. It is minimalistic, and the color you chose is elegant. The type is eligible, and the changes you made are remarkable. I love how you added tabs on the top to link to your projects and home page. I also like how you included the hamburger menu for your mobile; it helps keep the minimalistic theme you have in the computer layout. My only suggestion is to add more green color through your layout, maybe in the links or your name. Everything else looks great, and I'm excited to see your website live! :D

Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2023 1:43 pm
by chloecutter
Hey Olivia! Love the project buttons at the top, it makes for a clean, easy-to-navigate design! Your image in an oval shape reminds me of a locket necklace, love the soothing green as well, great job!

Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2023 7:05 pm
by Instructor
A very clean layout here, Olivia. A solid, by the numbers website.

The thing that stands out to me about it is the cleanliness of it all. Everything is placed so well I can move my eye around easily through your composition, finding what I need at will. The composition also helps my eye move around. Decent margins too. Right on the edge of fragmenting in some spots, but it does not tip over said edge. Everything is easy to read. Your type choices work well and you use both color and boldness to establish hierarchy. The whole thing just works together like a well oiled machine. A deeply solid website.

I'm not even sure you needed the white boxes. Maybe on your buttons to draw attention, but your layout moves the eye around so well, I don't think it's strictly necessary.

Good work!

Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2023 8:16 pm
by KAWINTHRAC
Hi Olivia,
Your pages look very minimal and clean. I like your color and fonts choices. The composition of your page layout is really good.

Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 12:22 pm
by ngrover19
Hello Olivia!

Simple and strong layout. The location of everything feels natural and it's hard to find a critique that isn't purely opinion-based. Great web page!

Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 2:02 pm
by Genevieve Dierenga
Hi, Olivia

I loved the simple design you went with for your design, it looks very easy to navigate. I also like the font that you used for your menu buttons such as home and the projects.

Re: Project 01 Final

Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 4:53 pm
by anacatnic
Hi olivia!

Love the sage green border you used! Very simple but effective layout. Great job!