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Project 04 Prelim!

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2023 12:47 pm
by jillian_rodgers
Hi everyone!

Here are my Project 4 roughs. I definitely am not totally content about some of the aspects, but I can change those in the final :) I tried to do a more "artsy" look on the first one, then did a clean and professional layout on the second one.
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Re: Project 04 Prelim!

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2023 2:05 pm
by Brooke_Brown
Hi Jillian! I looooove your home page for your first version with the green blob! It immediately made me go "oooooooooooh", super fun! I like it a lot!

Re: Project 04 Prelim!

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2023 2:21 pm
by chloecutter
Hi Jillian, I love your first design solely because it represents the college more accurately, even though your images of the lake/mountains are beautiful! I also enjoy the logo you've made with the circles for the GAMT program!

Re: Project 04 Prelim!

Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2023 2:23 pm
by onnimelon
The bubble effect is so cute. I agree though that the green design is more on brand here for the school website. I think the text might be too bold to comfortably read the paragraph type but great idea with this landing page. I'm definitely more inspired for my own

Re: Project 04 Prelim!

Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2023 7:13 pm
by Giselle
Hi Jillian!
I love both of your roughs for the GAMT website! My favorite layout is the first one. It has the same color scheme as the TMCC logo, and the navigation is easy to find. I love the typeface you chose; you displayed hierarchy well with the type styles. My only suggestion is to put the body copy in the bubble effect you created for the home page. I feel like that would pull your layout together. Besides that, I can't wait to see your website come to life! :D

Re: Project 04 Prelim!

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2023 4:39 pm
by LMisher
Hi Jillian!

Wow! Both of your drafts were very good. The version with the mountains and river was simply breath-taking, and I enjoyed the colors and fonts of the version with the students (Degrees) as well. Overall, you did a very nice job. I can't wait to see the finished product!

Re: Project 04 Prelim!

Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2023 11:46 pm
by Natuwu
Hi Jillian!
I really like the homepage in your first design, the logo stands out really well and your navigation fits in perfectly. I also really like your inner page for your second design, the background image is beautiful.

Re: Project 04 Prelim!

Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2023 8:47 pm
by Genevieve Dierenga
Hi, Jillian

I how you laid out the first page with the green bubbles and the acronym it is very well put together and I it looks really easy to navigate one suggestion I do have is on your second page the word degree feels like it's kind of just hanging out there something you might do to add a drop shadow to separate it form the background.

Re: Project 04 Prelim!

Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2023 12:44 pm
by KAWINTHRAC
Hi Jillian,

I like your GAMT logo. I also like that you create a background for your body text and make it easier to read. Your nav bar is looking good for both design.

Re: Project 04 Prelim!

Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2023 8:11 pm
by CedarM
Hey Jillian,
Great job on your designs! I think I like the way the second version looks much better however the first version says tmcc to me more. I think if you could create a similar site to the second one but using maybe snowy imagery of the campus could be really cool