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Project 04 Prelim

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2023 9:36 pm
by KAWINTHRAC
Hi my name is Kawinthra. This is my first draft for project 4. I tried to make it clean and easy to navigate. I chose green, white and black to be my colors refer to TMCC's color.

Option 1:
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Option 2:
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Re: Project 04 Prelim

Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2023 9:26 am
by Giselle
Hi Kawinthra!
I LOVE both of these rough designs! They are both well organized and have great contrast. The color scheme you went for stays true to the TMCC colors; it gives similarities. My favorite layout is the second layout with the big green buttons. It helps to have more straightforward navigation and looks very intriguing. My only suggestion is to move the picture to the white line on your second design mobile version. Besides that, this already looks amazing, and I can't wait to see it live! :D

Re: Project 04 Prelim

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2023 4:12 pm
by LMisher
Hello Kawinthra!

I really enjoyed both versions of your drafts. I like the way you incorporated the TMCC colors and use of space. I look forward to seeing your finished product. Good job!

Re: Project 04 Prelim

Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2023 11:13 pm
by chloecutter
Hey Kawinthra! These are looking so good, your choice of typefaces, playing with shapes, and organization are coming together to create a strong project. I would choose the second layout because I enjoy your contrast in that layout more, plus the orange looks awesome!

Re: Project 04 Prelim

Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2023 12:05 am
by Natuwu
Hi Kawinthra!
I really like the touch of orange in your design, it goes so well with the green. I like the layout of your second design a bit more, but both are amazing! Great job!

Re: Project 04 Prelim

Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2023 9:09 pm
by Genevieve Dierenga
Hi Kawinthra!

Really like both your designs but I think I'm leaning more towards first layout I like how it has a good asymmetrical balance as well as having a really easy way to navigate through the pages

Re: Project 04 Prelim

Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2023 8:16 pm
by CedarM
Hi,
Great job on these designs! I think I like the first version better, having the darker footer and header gives your design really nice contrast and depth.

Re: Project 04 Prelim

Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2023 10:06 pm
by jillian_rodgers
Hi Kawinthra!

I really enjoy your second design, it looks extremely professional and clean! Amazing job :)

Re: Project 04 Prelim

Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2023 11:22 pm
by Instructor
I like your second one better, KAWINTHRAC. Much better contrast and layout. I like the clearly delineated navigation, image, and copy areas.

What stands out to me are your excellent image choices. Big panoramas that compress nicely down into your mobile layouts. I also like that they change from page to page to give your users an easy shorthand of where they are and what content they're looking at. Good use of TMCC's colors throughout. Your type choices are clean and easy to read and go with the hard Bauhausian block layout you've built for yourself here. Great margins, by and large, on this whole thing. Nothing feels crowded or excessively pushed around. Like your images, your layout compresses nicely into a mobile versions. For as many navigations as you have, they're all easy to find, see, and presumably use.

Your bodycopy content is coming apart a little in your mobile inner layout.

Excellent work!

Re: Project 04 Prelim

Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2023 4:45 pm
by livitup1
These look very professional and well done. I'm leaning towards the 2nd design more