GRC 175 Learning and Discussion Forum

The websites that helped me out the most were portfolio designs off Behance. https://www.behance.net/gallery/1766810 ... folio&l=57 and https://edz.us/albums/abstracts-i/ were both inspirational in terms of being interesting yet still simplistic.

Chloe,

These are great. The colors on the yellow design really got my eye right away. My first impression was of a pumpkin, so if I were to suggest a change it would be the shape of the ellipse. Maybe reduce opacity a bit more? Just a thought. On the second design I really like how your added a red gradient into the background to draw back from all the black. It gave it a good balance.

Nice work.

Chris

Great design layouts! The first is my favorite. I would maybe do a fade/ gradient for the background photo so the pattern, name and logo can stick out more and not look too busy. Good job.

Hello Chloe,

I love both of your designs, they both tell such a different story. I am drawn to the one with the Star Wars vibe more, but I love the movies so maybe that's why, lol. I love the logo you made, the colors and typeface are great too. Maybe use a hamburger menu for the mobile view? Frees up more space for a smaller screen size. You can add your email and all the extras with the extra space you'll have.

Hello Chloe,

Great job on these. I love the illustration of the cold design and the colors are beautiful together. Perhaps giving a bit more weight to the three selections at the bottom would help balance out the type.

Hello! I love the firsy yellow version! The colors and photo of your are very eye catching. I also love the retro looking font you used. Great job

I really like the yellow design, I really like the picture you used, and your font choice. I think putting the navigation at the top for the mobile layout would work a little better, it works on the desktop but it might be hard to see on the phone. I like the background and the heard designs you used, it adds a lot and It add some personality to the design, good job!

Hello! I love your designs! They have a great theme on their own and that makes it look like a great website so far! My only suggestion is for the sunflower one, maybe change the photo’s shape to fit in with the rest of the image. I personally think its sharp

Hello Chloe,
I found your designs absolutely stunning and very professional. The attention to detail is awesome, but I Am really draw to the Star Wars vibes. The character on it is beautiful and I like the body font for your introduction. My only suggestion is trying to play around with fonts. I like the main fonts you have now but I feel you can find one that ties with the theme of your composition. Overall great work can’t wait to see it.

Hi! I love both designs and how they are completely different from each other so it is hard to pick a favorite. But I feel like the overall composition of your darker design looks cleaner and is a little easier to look at than the one with a busy background. Both font choices also work well with each design, but I like the more bubbly and fun font. If you go with your darker design, maybe you could find a fun font that represents you but still fits into the composition well.