GRC 175 Learning and Discussion Forum

Okay!

So I took you're advice and went with my first. I also corrected my mistakes by excluding the "websites" portion and placed them at the bottom of this post.

Originally, my logo on my squarespace website (https://www.tyleroath.com) is Red! but when I went to make it more transparent... the orange was the result and... ya know, I dig it! It gives off that desert vibe... so here we are!

Also, i cant seem to get FileZilla to connect to the website server for some reason... So i hope i don't lose points for a late upload!

Here's the sites that inspired me along this journey!

- https://www.factorycreatives.com , a super interesting layout with animated movement as you scroll.
- https://www.siteinspire.com , a collection of inspiring websites from all over the world.
- https://www.codecademy.com , Learn to code!
- https://www.skillshare.com/en/ , Learn how to design a website and much more!

You were right to mark this thread as you did, because this design is straight fire!

You've taken care of the scattered content issue I talked about previously. Everything is much tighter. You also widened the mobile content area, which gives it much more room to breathe. I love the use of transparency as well. It never fails to add visual interest to the composition. Even with your transparency slightly more opaque, your kickass rabbit logo/spirit animal shines through. The colors are still working great as well and set each other off nicely. I'm curious to see what your navigation will look like and how it will work once you build this for Project Two. Typographically, this is a strong design as well. The narrow typefaces move the eye up and down the composition.

The padding on your mobile content box is a little tight. Aside from that, you fixed all the other issues I had with it.

Excellent work!

Hi Tyler,

I like your design a lot. I like the transparency of the bunny how it plays with the opacity with the body copy. Great choice of type! It’s easy to read and helps with knowing what to look to next.

Great work,
Rebekah

Hi Tyler,
Really good job on this layout, your page is nice and clean and tight. I like the irregular circles for your images, nice touch. I just can't see a navigation area unless it's the black lines that are in the top right corner. Anyway, great job, look forward to navigating your finished page.

Hi Tyler,
I'm happy you went with this design the colors fit nicely and your logo looks great in that orange. The tight font looks good but is hard to read for your mobile design. I like the use of the circles as pictures as well. I'm excited to see this website up and running.

Hey Tyler!

Your website looks really good! I like that you added more pictures and filled in some of the space. Your color choices are good too. I think that there's still a lot of empty space that could be filled my something. Also your body copy may be a bit small.

Hi Tyler! This turned out SOOO well!! It was already amazing initially and you turned it into something really polished!

Have a good night!
Percy