Hi everyone!
Out of my two designs I decided to go with my starry night! My changes were small but they helped it a lot! I removed the white border from before, removed the stroke from the moon, downsized all of my elements, and spaced everything out so it wasn't cramped anymore!
Thank you to everyone who gave me feedback!!
Hi Breanna,
I love your layout it is very eye-catching and unique. I would say maybe to darken the background a little to make it look more like night, and I think you are going to need more navigation buttons than just the two you have. Other than that, great job.
I really like your creativity for this project! I really like the moon and stars, they play a part in framing your picture and making it a place for your projects and resources. I love the colors, you did a great job of using white and lighter colors (which is hard to find that balance). I like how you maintained the design in the mobile version. Both are very cohesive.
Hi Breanna,
I still love this color scheme and am happy you chose it. The only thing I might change is the buttons. The font on the buttons is a little thin. and hard to see. Maybe pick something that stands out more on the white stars. Overall there isn't much to change for this design I love that it's easy to navigate and visually pleasing. Great work its amazing.
Ah, good. You freed it from the white frame. It looks like it has room to exhale now. Much better!
In fact you've been through the whole thing, rearranging everything so the composition is not crammed together. Nicely done! The little star background looks so much mile a bunch of star stickers on the wall/ceiling of a kids room. What a fun effect. I like the night sky gradient in the background, too. It adds visual interest and gives the whole thing a peaceful vibe. Your star buttons look eminently pushable. I want to poke 'em. I also like your typeface. It makes the whole thing look scribbled on a wall which works with your star stickers. What's weird is that a font that interesting looking actually makes for a very legible bodycopy. The moon with your pic really completes the whole look. It feels like a novelty picture frame you'd get off Etsy. The whole vibe of this thing is just great.
Your "Projects" and "Resources" look a little right aligned in your star navigation buttons. I think they could have used a little centering.
Good work!
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Hi Breanna
Great design. I like your whole bubbly cute style with the stars and the moon. It also looks pretty easy to navigate through. I would just suggest adding maybe one more button. I feel like just two buttons makes it look kind of empty. Other than that, your design looks pretty neat.
Your layout is easy to read and on my eyes. I like the color a lot and the calming shapes. The photo to be looks a bit small, if you were to increase the size maybe it would help some white space under it.
Your website is very cute! I think that the star navigational buttons work really well with your space background. I like the font you chose as well, it all feels very soft and calm. I think that there is a little too much empty space. Maybe fill it up with another space thing? I don't know, just a suggestion. Good job!
Brebre!!!
I love how this turned out it's very cute and very you! :] Moon & Stars :] Also forgot to mention I'm a big fan of the pink you chose to gradient into the purple its a perfect dusk/dawn look that I feel can be hard to create sometimes.
