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Project02 Final
Posted: Fri Nov 01, 2024 6:32 pm
by Luke_Nelson
Hello, Luke here!
I had fun and learned a LOT while making this! I'm already brainstorming other sites I wanna make. I hope you all enjoy my website! I look forward to seeing what all of you made.
Website Link:
https://www.grc175.com/student/fall-2024/luke-nelson/
Re: Project02 Final
Posted: Sun Nov 03, 2024 2:34 pm
by david_wolstenholm
Hi Luke,
I like your web page, it's simple, easy to view, the color palette is good, and I like that you went the extra mile and made your links active. Very cool.
Re: Project02 Final
Posted: Tue Nov 05, 2024 4:00 pm
by rebekah_stevenson
Hi Luke,
You did a great job executing your project one design. The layering in your name and on the sticky notes is really cool! My suggestions would be to have the same sized margins all the way around "Home" so the box is even and to have margins/space outside your picture because it's going into your name.
Overall great job,
Rebekah
Re: Project02 Final
Posted: Wed Nov 06, 2024 10:58 am
by Instructor
Structurally, I think you did a good job at replicating your Project One design here, Luke.
You've done a great job programmatically building your scrapbook design with stacks of <div> tags. An interesting approach that you've made work here. For the most part you've brought across your excellent colors which are enhanced by the way the composition sits on a black background. You have generally good margins on all the main elements and my eye finds it's way through your composition quite easily. You've also done a good job of preserving your name as the dominant element of your composition.
The blue navigation blends in with your black background a little too much. Too bad you couldn't get your cool fonts, textured cover image, and rings to work. I'm not sold on the more vivid colors for your post-it notes. Your image needed a little more vertical margin between it and your name above it. I don't think you needed to have all your CSS piled up in the HTML code. A separate CSS would have done the job.
Good effort!
Re: Project02 Final
Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2024 6:02 pm
by Danielle Roberts
Hey, Luke,
Great job getting all the info on the webpage and your composition is coming together, I do agree the blue links blend into the background a little. All together love the iron giant image! Great job!
Re: Project02 Final
Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2024 7:32 pm
by Lhart
Hello Luke
I feel like our ideas had some overlap and it looks pre web 2. I like the simple idea executed well and thats what you have. Excellent work with overlaps
Re: Project02 Final
Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2024 7:35 pm
by shasta_the_masta
Luke,
Your home page looks neat! I think the composition looks very cool and high-contrast. I agree with everyone that the blue nav links are hard to see, but I had trouble changing my link color on one part of my page, too, so I get it. The link to the funny Spider-man clip made me laugh.
Re: Project02 Final
Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2024 7:44 pm
by m1ggsart
Hello Luke.
Good job on your design. I like how colorful and dynamic it looks. One thing I would change is margin on the picture under your name, and your bio on the book. Other than that, your design came out great!
Re: Project02 Final
Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2024 7:45 pm
by Perchy
Hi Luke!
I love the colors and everything stands out a lot :] Turned out awesome!
Percy
Re: Project02 Final
Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2024 3:14 am
by Chloe_(╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻
Hey Luke, your website is very nice and and easy to navigate! I like your colors and it appears that your links work! I really struggled with that....Good job!