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Project 3 Preliminary Work
Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2024 7:53 am
by rena_w0327
Re: Project 3 Preliminary Work
Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2024 1:38 pm
by david_wolstenholm
Hi Rena,
I really like your designs and you went all out and designed all 5 pages, good on you. However, in your Dark Mode, it is really hard to read. Other than that, good job.
Re: Project 3 Preliminary Work
Posted: Wed Nov 20, 2024 10:20 am
by Instructor
Don't worry, Rena. You can sleep when the semester is over. Though I think you overworked yourself on this one. I was just looking for a homepage and a sample inner page, not your whole site. At least you have it all laid out now.
I'm not seeing a tremendous difference between your two designs, but I prefer you first one. It feels cleaner and sharper and uses margin a little better. That's really what stands out to me about it. The cleanliness and professionalism. It has good structure and is super informational. The dark gray helps make the TMCC green almost an acceptable color. Quite a victory given how terribad it is. I like how you use it as an accent color. It's almost redeeming it. Your type is well chosen, too. Super clean and professional. Your navigation is well placed and should be easy to use. I'm also vaguely terrified at what class Walter White would teach in our program! Maybe the printing class.
The big change that these NEED is to make the bodycopy much more visible against the background. Right now it's vanishing. I think simply making the bodycopy white will solve all your problems. Maybe play with making your headlines TMCC green. I'd also add more imagery in here. I'm looking for something that advertises the department as much as it informs. You've got info on lock. Now I'd like to see a little more pizazz.
Not bad at all!
Re: Project 3 Preliminary Work
Posted: Thu Nov 21, 2024 10:21 am
by Lhart
Hello Rena,
I like your designs! Both are super flushed out. The dark mode is definitely a struggle lol, and that dark design is what I prefer, but there is a big contrast issue on the black on gray. I dont know if white text would be the best idea, but play around with it!