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Project 3 preliminary

Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2012 11:09 am
by angelraiders
Here are my roughs for preliminary critique. Same concept with different layouts. Let me know what you think.
grc1.jpg
grc2.jpg
Here are the other pair, which I like more and i think would work better.
tmcc_grc1.jpg
tmcc_grc_innner.jpg

Re: Project 3 preliminary

Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2012 4:25 pm
by cheyanne
I like the second one, the color scheme is really cool and I like where the navigation is.
However the banner/header looks just a little bit too big.

Re: Project 3 preliminary

Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2012 7:49 pm
by sktlz1965
cheyenne you were reading my mind cuz that exactly what I am thinking to, make the header smaller, OR maybe overlap it onto the box below so its not as heavy and bulky up at the top. I think the organization on the second one is cool, and interesting yet works really well.

Re: Project 3 preliminary

Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2012 9:43 pm
by R3YNO
I agree with Faith and Cheyenne's comments on the size of the banner it should be smaller, however I see no reason why you cant have it full size on the home page like in the second design...

Re: Project 3 preliminary

Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2012 8:13 am
by trisa_lunstrum
your typography is very cool, I actually like your first design, especially the secondary pages, it looks more dynamic and maybe a little less cluttered

Re: Project 3 preliminary

Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2012 2:10 pm
by artgalstyle
Can I say I like them all and can't you use all of them. All four of your designs are awesome.

Laramie

Re: Project 3 preliminary

Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2012 4:26 pm
by Alaxvong
Very neat typography. I would go with the second design. The layout has more visual interest.

Re: Project 3 preliminary

Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2012 5:11 pm
by thusers
the typography is bad ass. how did you come up with it? very nice.

Re: Project 3 preliminary

Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2012 5:57 pm
by jenny_snaza
wowsa! I like the second one...though maybe the inner pages have a smaller header.

Re: Project 3 preliminary

Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2012 4:42 pm
by deni
I like them all! I am especially liking the first page with the large diagonal header. They are all colorful but not cluttered. Great job on the typography.

Denise