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Jenny Snaza Preliminary P3
Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2012 5:51 pm
by jenny_snaza
Here is my first design for project 3. I will use a different image for the home page...just didn't have any on hand that I loved.
Also I think that I will create my "M" so it has the same weight as the T CC
Design 2: PS I want to do #1 : )
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thanks for looking
Re: Jenny Snaza Preliminary P3
Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2012 6:10 pm
by sktlz1965
I think I like the first one better, mainly cuz I'm not so hot over the background on the second design, I love those column images, those are very artistic and modern!
Faith
Re: Jenny Snaza Preliminary P3
Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2012 6:33 pm
by Alaxvong
I like the first layout more. It would need to be a lot bigger when you start to build it. I was going to mention the weight of the m, but you're on top of it.
Re: Jenny Snaza Preliminary P3
Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2012 6:37 pm
by jenny_snaza
Totally stole the columns from Alax in 118! Lol!
Re: Jenny Snaza Preliminary P3
Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2012 6:41 pm
by TommieGuy
I like the first design. I like the M as is. If you go with the same weight for it, I hope you'll leave it elongated --I like the way it pairs with the social media icons.
Nice look overall. It would give me a good impression of the school if I saw this as their site.
Re: Jenny Snaza Preliminary P3
Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2012 8:46 pm
by artgalstyle
I love love love the first one. The way you have used your font with all that cool color and text is wonderful. Love how the M on the TMCC comes down below your line and the placement of the buttons are great. This is way more fun than the real site. Can't wait.
Laramie
Re: Jenny Snaza Preliminary P3
Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2012 2:04 pm
by deni
I, too, like the first one. I think if you change the weight of any of the letters I'd be interested in seeing how it would look with the T C C the same as the M. I like the columns, the entire design looks very clean and sharp! Great concept!
Denise
Re: Jenny Snaza Preliminary P3
Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2012 3:13 pm
by R3YNO
Your first design has better harmony than your second. I would bring the photos coloser together to eliminate some of the negative space since they seem a little far apart.
Re: Jenny Snaza Preliminary P3
Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2012 4:13 pm
by cheyanne
I like the first one, it's really artsy and fun~
Re: Jenny Snaza Preliminary P3
Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2012 6:34 pm
by angelraiders
I like your first one better, I would work on the inner page. I like the column layout with the images being cropped, but i think theres something missing on the left and bottom. I would have them take up more of the space. I also like that the M on TMCC connects you to the social media links.